In the story "The Cold Equation" the main conflict wit it was that if there was any intruders on the stardust that they would get jettisoned. The guy found a girl on the ship. She was a teenage girl that was half his height. He put his gun down and called his commander and told him it was an emergency. He told the commander that it was not a man it was a girl that wanted to see her brother. The commander still said that she still had to die. She was afraid and said okay. She wrote a letter to her mother father and brother. Then was shot out onto space. If it was Marilyn's point of view she would probably save the person and find more ways to save the person. She would also find people to come and take the person from the ship. It can effect the story by wasting time and a much more difficult task for her.
Yaya, there are a few parts of the instructions you failed to address, such including the current point of view, and the new point of view.
ReplyDeleteYou also had to explain how details would be different if told from Marilyn’s point of view.
Please read directions carefully.