Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Internal and External Conflicts "The Bass, the River, and Shelia Mant"


The Bass, the River, and Shelia Mant
was a story about how this young boy a crush for a girl by the name of Shelia Mant. When he saw her he saw her glow and his heart would pound out of his chest. He thought that he was falling in love with her. He would find ways to get her attention and when he did he would try to impress her. One day he wanted to ask her out, but he just decided to ask her if she would like to go to a party. he said sure and then he went to get her in his canoe. She went with him and was asking all these questions while he noticed a big fish. He wanted to catch it and when he tried he just couldn't. It was the biggest fish he had ever seen. He tried , but then he just let go by cutting the string. Once the got there he had danced with her a couple of times. Then at the end she told him that she was going home with someone else. He then said that was fine. After that he was over her and his little crush, but he was haunted about the fish he could have caught. He then knew that he let a fish go away for a girl. That was his mistake. He wanted the girl, but he wanted the fish more.

1 comment:

  1. Yaya, this doesn't answer the prompt.
    :(
    Please read and follow directions.

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