Tuesday, January 18, 2011

“Animal Farm” Revolution at SPA

So it was a nice Friday at SPA and Julie and Yemeni were hanging out because Yemeni had an injured ankle. Yemeni only trusted Julie to push her in the wheel chair because she did the same for her. So then Yemeni’s friend Betsy had began to be jealous because they thought that they were close like that. So Betsy was getting so jealous that she had to be in a bad attitude and have a negative vibe. So then the next day Yemeni wanted to talk to Betsy but she was so into having a attitude with her that she just looked at her, gave her a dirty look and said, “NO” in a nasty tone. Then that night Yemeni told Betsy that she was tired of the negativity and the ugly notes that she ended a friendship because Yemeni did not need some one like that. So Julie and Yemeni just hung out and did not bother with any one. Then it became a nasty and ugly argument then into a fight. Then the day after the fights and the arguments with students were increasing and it was not even a full moon. So the next day Julie was put to go some where for a bit and no one knows for how long. When Yemeni found out she was furious and mad because she thought that Betsy deserved to go as well because she was less innocent then Julie. Then the campus went crazy because the staff were unfair and scared the staff away and even some students. The campuses went ballistic and were not in shape after the staffs were gone. The campus did not know how to provide for them selves and there were arguments every day. Oh boy, this campus looks like a dump, with no staff to keep order these students made it look dirty and not sanitized. The student’s rooms were dirty and they were dirty them selves. Then at the end the students begged for staff to come back and ask for help because most of them were not ready to be alone. Then the staff came back and the students were put back on track.

3 comments:

  1. You did a great job on your paragraph!Keep up the good work

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  2. this is good you should make this a movie.

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  3. What a creative story, Yaya. Great job!

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