“Through the Tunnel” Analysis Paragraph

In my opinion I do. I find it convinced because he saw it and wanted to know where it would lead to, and how far will it take him. To him his goal was to try to see how long he can hold his breath. Then he figured that he could not hold it for long so he had to try to train his lungs to hold till he got to the other end. When his nose began to bleed that was a sign of hard work and dedication in his own goal. When it was time for him to try even though at first he wanted to wait till next year he new that he could do it. When he entered the tunnel he saw the clear green see and saw fish. When he was about half way his head began to hurt and he was beginning to panic but he still went on. When he saw the light ahead he try to remember how to kick his feet to make him go faster. Then when he was close he felt like he was going to die so he hurried up to get to the light and out of the water. When he got out he looked like a fish coming and begging for air. When he came out he saw nothing but red and began to think that his eyes had popped out and exploded. Then he took off his goggles and saw the blood go into the water. It was his nose that filled the goggles with blood. Then he splashed water in his face and was happy that he went to through the tunnel and did not wait. When he finally went though the tunnel and made it without dieing I was glad because he had worked so hard and did what he wanted to do and figure out, but yes I do find it convincing.