Thursday, April 28, 2011
Playwrights Project Scene 1 for Feedback
If you would like to see it on Google Docs click on the link below:
https://docs.google.com/document/pub?id=1bQgJyhUQNBURiQV9I1LQc5aPfxELhJB3-bFh0u5ZcEI
Please do tell me what you think about my 1st scene!
Answer the poll on the bottom.
-----------What do you want to read about in the next scene of my play?
-----------What is the best part of my scene?
-----------What could I add to this scene to make it better?
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That's a very nice start Yaya. You should keep going. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThe best part was the dialogue.
ReplyDeleteGood job YAYa, but I know you can do way much better then that!!
ReplyDeleteGood Job YAYa Keep up the good work.
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