Monday, July 11, 2011

“A Blessing” Break into Blossom Paragraph


On February 22, 1995 in the hospital a baby was born. That baby was me. Well my mother was giving birth and I had finally come out. I saw people surrounding me and lots of smiles. I heard people saying it's a girl and she is so beautiful. You guys are lucky parents. I touched my fathers hand and his hand was soft, chubby and big. I felt happy but at the same time I felt loved for the first time ever by my father. It made me feel lucky and glad to know that when I came to the world that I had a family.

6 comments:

  1. Were we suppose to paste the poem to our blogs or write our own experience?

    ReplyDelete
  2. Birth is such a beautiful thing :) Nice description.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Goog job i like your post very much, but that wasnt the homework.

    ReplyDelete
  4. What does being born have to do with blossoming?

    ReplyDelete
  5. Hmmm... I don't remember being born.

    ReplyDelete
  6. Thats awesome how you cam talk about you own birth.

    ReplyDelete