Wednesday, July 13, 2011

“Tiburon” Before You Read

A jacket is like a humans coat it keeps us warm on cold days and the fur that is on the bear is his coat that keeps him warm during the winter. In a way the two objects are a lot alike. The jacket is made of cotton which is really thick or thin that keeps our body covered. The fur on the bear is thick and heavy so the bear can keep itself warm during the winter and not have to worry about going into hyporthermia. They both us warm and are very good friends towards us. When I see the manmade object I want to go buy one because when it is cold and I do not have a jacket with me, I just want one to put on to get warm again.

2 comments:

  1. Please read and follow directions carefully. The assignment directions were to think of one manmade object—something that is not from nature. Then you had to create a simile to compare the object to something in nature. The paragraph had to state and explain your simile. This was to be something that you thought up of.
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  2. By the way, this looks exactly like what Kelsey wrote on her homework, too!

    Check it out:
    http://kelsey2012.blogspot.com/2011/07/tiburon-before-you-read.html


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